วันเสาร์ที่ 18 มกราคม พ.ศ. 2557

My bad /good impression on the end of 2013 year and the New year 2014



          I celebrate New Year on the 31st of December. It is great holiday. We buy new clothes and new things. Such as different salads, cake fruits and prepares several foods. We sing songs, play games, dance and have a lot of fun. But usually the weather is warm and no snow. Then we watch fireworks outside and hear many loud sounds. The sound of crackers all are New Year spirit. In conclusion I want to say that we have good New Year with our family.

         New year Day is a special day for our people. Markets and shops are crowded with people. Everyone is  making shopping buying tasty things and presents. We decorate our house with decoration, and new year tree. We make our dastarhan and put all things on it. We send post cards to friends and give presents to close people. In our town you can see New Year tree. And all families go in the evening and take photos there. There you can hear sounds of salutes and crackers. Some crackers are so dangerous. And to use propellant explosion in the streets is canceled because it scare people and not safe.


         For me New Year is wonderful day. I spent it with my family. We cook and make many tasty things and eat it till the next day January 1st. And in New Year family and I watched TV because many good New Year programs and concerts are shown. And children and fathers prepare the fireworks and lit it in the street and watch other fireworks through the window. And people usually do not sleep they watch tV and go to relative and friend’s houses and congratulate each other with New year wishes. And at 12 o’clock our president delivers New Year speech and tells about country’s achievement and success. And when the clock strike 12 o’clock midnight everyone raise their cup and each other Happy New Year. And my mother says how you spend the first day of new year so it will finish. If you start quarrel all year you will have quarrel. And every one try to spend the first day of new year with smile and joy. And In New year eve people try to get rid of some old things, clothes.

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  1. Hi, Manita
    Do you tell your story on the 31 December 2013? If yes, you should use past simple in every sentence.

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  2. I think that you should usd past in sentence because New year day 2014 is the story in the past

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  3. I think, you should use past tense verb for telling your story because your story has already passed.

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  4. You should use past tense for your writing story.

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  5. Wow! Gib. Your wrote it well, and it is interesting.
    Some error
    - make merit.
    Should add an article "make a merit."
    Check about articles and verb tense.

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