I had Paragraph Writing test on 11 January 2014,
which I think it is quite difficult. Writing all the tests yet. I do not regret
that fully as they should. But I take solace that Tai is not yourself. Today I
woke up earlier than usual because I wanted studying for an exam. When I was sitting in the examination
room I felt confused and I can't remembered words for Paragraph Writing. I
almost do not test in time because I can't think about anything.
Today I tired to do everything because I sleepless at night. Thank you for teaching me. I couldn't have done it without the teacher.
I also feel confused about your content a little bit. You should add more content.
ตอบลบI think that some sentence you should used punctuation mark
ตอบลบThe part of your paragraph makes me confused because I have never known some of your words before.
ตอบลบI think some sentences are incorrect and some sentences should have a comma marker.
ตอบลบHa-ha-ha-ha! Your story is really short. I think it well.
ตอบลบSome error
- on 11 January 2014, which I....
Should cut an comma "on 11 January 2014 which I...."
- Writing all the tests
Should be "all writing of the tests"
- I can't remembered
Should be"I couldn't remember"